[llvm-bugs] [Bug 42017] New: Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial

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https://bugs.llvm.org/show_bug.cgi?id=42017

            Bug ID: 42017
           Summary: Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial
           Product: Documentation
           Version: trunk
          Hardware: All
                OS: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P
         Component: General docs
          Assignee: unassignedbugs at nondot.org
          Reporter: dan.raviv at gmail.com
                CC: llvm-bugs at lists.llvm.org

The tutorial at https://lldb.llvm.org/use/tutorial.html has some
typos/potential for improvements:

- "The logical breakpoint has an integer id, and it’s locations..."
it's->its

- "This is an convenient point"
an->a

- "Also the logical breakpoints"
Insert comma after "Also"

- "For instance if you set a breakpoint"
Insert comma after "For instance"

- Some right parentheses have the period before them, some after.

- "(lldb) help <breakpt-id> <breakpt-id> -- Breakpoint ID's consist major and
minor numbers; the major etc..."
Missing newline between the two instances of <breakpt-id>

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