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title="NEW - Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial"
href="https://bugs.llvm.org/show_bug.cgi?id=42017">42017</a>
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<th>Summary</th>
<td>Typos fixes and text improvements in lldb tutorial
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<th>Product</th>
<td>Documentation
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<th>Version</th>
<td>trunk
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<th>Hardware</th>
<td>All
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<th>OS</th>
<td>All
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<th>Status</th>
<td>NEW
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<th>Severity</th>
<td>normal
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<th>Priority</th>
<td>P
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<th>Component</th>
<td>General docs
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<th>Assignee</th>
<td>unassignedbugs@nondot.org
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<th>Reporter</th>
<td>dan.raviv@gmail.com
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<th>CC</th>
<td>llvm-bugs@lists.llvm.org
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<pre>The tutorial at <a href="https://lldb.llvm.org/use/tutorial.html">https://lldb.llvm.org/use/tutorial.html</a> has some
typos/potential for improvements:
- "The logical breakpoint has an integer id, and it’s locations..."
it's->its
- "This is an convenient point"
an->a
- "Also the logical breakpoints"
Insert comma after "Also"
- "For instance if you set a breakpoint"
Insert comma after "For instance"
- Some right parentheses have the period before them, some after.
- "(lldb) help <breakpt-id> <breakpt-id> -- Breakpoint ID's consist major and
minor numbers; the major etc..."
Missing newline between the two instances of <breakpt-id></pre>
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