[LLVMdev] [GSoC] Applying for GSoC 2015

[John Criswell]

Dear Mingxing,

I've attached comments to the PDF document and attached the document to 
this email.  You may need to use an option in your PDF reader to see the 
comments (I made the comment using Apple's Preview application).

The most significant thing you need to do is to provide better 
justification for the work.  What I (and I think others) want to see is 
an application of alias analysis that LLVM (or one of its sub-projects) 
is *already* using and how your project will improve that application of 
alias analysis.

You should also improve and fix the grammar and spelling (not so much 
for getting your proposal accepted but to practice doing well at that; 
it's something every Ph.D. student needs to practice).

Regards,

John Criswell

-- 
John Criswell
Assistant Professor
Department of Computer Science, University of Rochester
http://www.cs.rochester.edu/u/criswell

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