[PATCH] D122990: Added new file & improved inclusivity

[Jacques Pienaar via Phabricator via llvm-commits]

jpienaar added a comment.

> Improved Inclusivity to make it beginner-friendly

I'm not sure I see any change related to this.



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Comment at: README.md:3
 
-This directory and its sub-directories contain source code for LLVM,
 a toolkit for the construction of highly optimized compilers,
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I'd split this out: this is an LLVM change the rest is specific to MLIR


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Comment at: mlir/docs/LangRef.md:21
 MLIR is designed to be used in three different forms: a human-readable textual
-form suitable for debugging, an in-memory form suitable for programmatic
+form suitable for debugging; an in-memory form suitable for programmatic
 transformations and analysis, and a compact serialized form suitable for storage
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This change doesn't make sense.


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Comment at: mlir/docs/LangRef.md:47
 
-MLIR also provides an extensible framework for transformations on operations,
+MLIR also provides an extensible framework for the transformations on operations,
 using familiar concepts of compiler [Passes](Passes.md). Enabling an arbitrary
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Doesn't make sense.


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Comment at: mlir/docs/PassManagement.md:259
 
-  // Mark specific analyses as preserved. This is used if some transformation
+  // Mark-specific analyses as preserved. This is used if some transformation
   // was performed, but some analyses were either unaffected or explicitly
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Doesn't make sense 


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