[PATCH] D106235: Reformulate OrcJIT tutorial doc to make it more clear.

[Mehdi AMINI via Phabricator via llvm-commits]

mehdi_amini added inline comments.


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Comment at: llvm/docs/tutorial/BuildingAJIT2.rst:232
+and stores it in the target ``JITDylib``, arranging for it to be passed back
+to layer's emit method when someone requests any symbols defined by the module.
+Each layer can complete its own work by calling the ``emit`` method of its base
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I'm not sure this sentence is actually more clear. You're trying to go from a passive form to an active form, but it goes with introducing `someone` as the subject, which does not seem like usual to me when describing some piece of code calling another piece of code.
Are you following some guidelines on technical documentation here?


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