[PATCH] D83968: [docs] Add Deprecated section to ReleaseNotes

[Hubert Tong via Phabricator via llvm-commits]

hubert.reinterpretcast added inline comments.


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Comment at: llvm/docs/ReleaseNotes.rst:36
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+* BG/Q support including QPX will be removed in the 12.0.0 release.
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As written, the sentence implies that the subject is "BG/Q support that includes QPX" as opposed to "BG/Q support, which includes QPX". I believe the latter is meant, so I would suggest:
BG/Q support, including QPX, will be removed in the 12.0.0 release.


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