hi,<br>Thanks for the input, I'll do the necessary arrangements. <br>Regards,<br>Rajika<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Mar 30, 2008 at 9:48 PM, Duncan Sands <<a href="mailto:baldrick@free.fr">baldrick@free.fr</a>> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">Hi, sounds like a nice project. Some comments below.<br>
<br>
> *1. Project title:*<br>
<div class="Ih2E3d">> Extend the llvm-test testsuite to include new programs and benchmaraks[1],<br>
<br>
</div>benchmaraks -> benchmarks<br>
<div class="Ih2E3d"><br>
> and give a web service interface to run a test build remotely.<br>
<br>
</div>Also, this is not a title, it is a summary. How about calling it:<br>
"Improve the llvm testsuite"<br>
<br>
> *2. Abstract:*<br>
<div class="Ih2E3d">> LLVM[2] is a collection of libraries and header files of a virtual machine<br>
> and has a GCC-front end in which C/C++ programs can be compiled into LLVM<br>
> bitcode.<br>
<br>
</div>How about: LLVM[2] is a set of libraries and tools for code optimization,<br>
including a a virtual machine and a GCC-front end capable of compiling<br>
C, C++, ObjectiveC, Ada and Fortran programs.<br>
<div class="Ih2E3d"><br>
> The aim of this project is to improve the testsuite[3] of LLVM, which is an<br>
<br>
</div>improve the testsuite[3] of LLVM -> improve the LLVM testsuite[3]<br>
<br>
> extremely useful task.<br>
<br>
In general it is a bad idea to make this kind of unsupported claim: saying<br>
that something is "extremely useful" without explaining *why* it is extremely<br>
useful. You would do better to say: This would be extremely useful because<br>
X, Y and Z.<br>
<div class="Ih2E3d"><br>
> So the tesuite of the llvm is extended by including<br>
> this new programs and benchmarks[1].<br>
<br>
</div>-> Firstly, by expanding the coverage of the testsuite by adding new programs<br>
and benchmarks[1].<br>
<br>
At this point I had to go and do something else - I may be able to comment more<br>
later.<br>
<br>
Best wishes,<br>
<font color="#888888"><br>
Duncan.<br>
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